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Jun 22, 2023

It's okay Jun. I wouldn't remember everything in all the books either, just tell all of it to us slowly!

I also like this conflict between Mia x Amamiya. It reminds me of...there was this manga a long time ago about a single father sort of struggling to sort of move on from his wife who had passed on to a woman he now loved. Very heartwarming, very wholesome!

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:5

Jun 22, 2023

To:Pernodi

I think the angle I'm trying to go for is Vivian is so completely perplexed by these LitRPG elements that she kind of just plays around with no expectation that anything will come out of it.

That Time I Was Reincarnated as the Villainess's Stat Menu and Tried to Get Her Attention

Chapter:5

Jun 22, 2023

How is he ever going to treat Grace to nice food, is he going to just summon it in his mind?

The opening part of this chapter did make me wonder, like if Haru can just conjure up a perfect waifu for himself, then what is the point of playing video games when his imagination is just that good?! :xD:

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:4

Jun 22, 2023

I think the second half of the chapter is pretty charming, just very wholesome dialogue between the two characters who are kind of just shy and figuring themselves out.

That being said, the match ended a little climactically and I would've liked to just see a bit more oomph to sort of get us the feeling of disappointment that ended with the match!

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:4

Jun 22, 2023

Akari trying to convince himself that the reason he's focused on Ayano is because he's scared she'll reveal his secret is rich. ;)

Pretty Boy Gangster

Chapter:5

Jun 22, 2023

Ah yes, where have I heard of someone leaking classified documents on military grade material just to prove a point on an online platform?

Just nice references, also the idea of Jason pretending to be an embedded journalists in a video game battlefield is just such an iconic / multi-layered image and it makes me laugh.

Maniavolution

Chapter:5

Jun 22, 2023

Ahhhhh!!! There's a part about Lily's personality that's just so infuriating to me, I think it's because of my own experience with people who treated me that way and it just grates me.

Another thing I'd mention is the general use of the light motif, I like how it's sort of coming across, and I want to see how far you can push the envelope with the physical and figurative imagery!

To you, A Lei of Daisies

Chapter:5

Jun 22, 2023

Nice introduction to the action but I also just enjoyed the presentation of the mythology that you use at the beginning, the imagery of the goat as a classic depiction of the Devil. Nice!

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:5

Jun 22, 2023

The imagery of Arabella having sakura blossoms followed by the realization that there are no cherry blossoms around is like the perfect encapsulation of how weeb the main character is.

Writing a Guidebook with You

Chapter:1

Jun 22, 2023

You really nail the sort of teenage emotional rollercoaster and how they sort of get super excited over trivial things in how Akio talks to himself.

Ailurophobia

Chapter:5

Jun 22, 2023

Rika and Hikaru are pretty wholesome / good-natured friends. Very cute, and honestly Akio's experience that led to his ailurophobia is actually the exact same as how I got to be scared of cats for well over 15+ years.

Ailurophobia

Chapter:4

Jun 22, 2023

I love the idea of a cat plushie and I guess I'm a little surprised that I myself do not own one for my cat to maul...

Ailurophobia

Chapter:3

Jun 22, 2023

With that kind of immediately gratification after making your proposal to get over your phobia, it can't be that hard to get over your fears right?!

I also quite enjoy your sort of opening monologues. They're clever!

Ailurophobia

Chapter:2

Jun 22, 2023

I really enjoy the opening bit, but I would've liked to see you go further with it! What would Napoleon, Caesar, and the Khan all have to say?! I think it would give your narrator a really nice interiority / complexity and elevate the opening section. Other than that, I love cats and I also used to be scared of them, so this caught my eye immediately!

Ailurophobia

Chapter:1

Jun 21, 2023

"I had no inkling that such a worthless profession existed" is a pretty sweet burn. The idea of this person also simultaneously working as her manager sounds pretty hilarious. Is a profession managing a worthless profession also worthless?

Heartstrings and Horns

Chapter:4

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