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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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Sep 14, 2025

Didn't expect Squeaks to return. Also, finally caught up.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:25

Sep 14, 2025

Exactly what Kowa-sensei said. It's cozy in the castle, hell outside.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:24

Sep 14, 2025

Time for the home improvement arc.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:23

Sep 14, 2025

I remember way back when in school, The secret garden was read to us. I remember bits and pieces of it, but not the entire thing.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:22

Sep 14, 2025

Well that was a dark backstory. It does reinforce the point that this truly is hell though.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:21

Sep 14, 2025

Well, at least the passage didn't swallow him up, but now that we know this is a passage to the devil's assistant's mansion, we can expect the devil's assistant to try and use the passage to break into Lucien's mansion and steal Grace.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:20

Sep 14, 2025

You just had to go and add in that line at the end, didn't you.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:19

Sep 14, 2025

Just when things looked to be calming down, in comes a secret passageway.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:18

Sep 14, 2025

No rain does suck. The sound and scenic value of it are what makes it so calming.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:17

Sep 14, 2025

I'm still going to say Grace has some dark past, though with the knowledge we now have, maybe it was just bad, but not pure evil.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:16

Sep 14, 2025

Wonder what the markets will be like.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:15

Sep 14, 2025

The mindfuckery with the devil's assistant. That guy really is bad news.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:14

Sep 14, 2025

Now that I'm more attuned to the Beauty and the Beast vibes, I can't unsee them or get them out of my mind when I'm reading this.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:13

Sep 14, 2025

I know this is late, but Happy 2-year anniversary to this series.

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Chapter:1

Sep 14, 2025

Thank goodness the formatting's back to normal. As for my thoughts on the game, I feel it could have been done without the constant emphasis on the clock. If the time control was much lower, then yes, it would make sense, but both players had over 10 minutes on their clocks and were never in any real time trouble. The game by itself is solid though.

And now I just realized this is the latest chapter, so review time. As someone who also writes a chess novel, I feel my grading system might be a bit harsher compared to others, or more lenient in a sense as well. You've got a great premise, but sadly with this being the latest chapter, there isn't really much else to go off. There are many mysteries and potential face offs you could explore in future volumes, but with what's currently available, the story as a whole feels incomplete.

In terms of the games, you currently have just two, but sadly both suffered for a few reasons. The first game was more so just a minor gripe with me not liking how you were explaining how the notation works while the game was ongoing, but with the second one, the bad formatting completely ruined the experience. Luckily, some proper formatting is all I think you'd need to do to fix that game. I'm not sure if you'll ever return to this series, but if you do, know that you've got a good premise for any future plot lines.

Spirit Chess

Chapter:19