Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Apr 15, 2025

    To:Orionless

    Thank you for reading this all the way through and for commentating on nearly every chapter. Now to answer some of your questions. From the moment I first decided to write this, I knew the whole theme would be that the author of a famous manga is dying, thus his world is going to end. Silas is the main antagonist of the novel, however, I didn't want him to have the spotlight after his arc for one main reason, that being, he won. Silas' goal was simply to make Jeter miserable and hasten his demise. Even if he had been present, he would have let Jeter go in hopes of getting to watch him drop dead before he could submit his story, and even if Silas had been present to watch Jeter submit his story, it wouldn't have phased him, because once Jeter died, he wouldn't be able to protest anything he'd say or try to do to Cherry World.

    The main point I was trying to highlight with this ending is that it is the end of Jeter. From the very beginning, he was the main character and this story was told entirely from his perspective. Even the Silas that appeared in his world was ultimately Jeter's psych creating a perfect replica of the real deal, all for the purpose of reliving what happened to his manga in the real world in his psych. The reveal of everything taking place in Jeter's head while he inches closer to death was the main thing I was building the story up to. The ending was also intentionally bittersweet as Jeter needed to die, and once he died, so to did the world he himself created. I also didn't want to showcase what would happen to his manga after he died, since that would go against the whole theme of the story being Jeter's. Though I am a bit curious as to what more you wanted to see in the story, so feel free to let me know if you so choose. Once again, thank you for reading and supporting this series. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:22

    Apr 15, 2025

    [Game log #257]

    Here's the game from Chapter 410 between Laia and Lucie on board 2 in the Ecuador vs Czechoslovakia match in round 7 of the Chess Olympics.

    [Event "Chess Olympics"]
    [Site "Budapest, Hungary"]
    [Date "2024.09.23"]
    [Round "7"]
    [White "Laia Din (2051)"]
    [Black "Lucie Čechová (2198)"]
    [Result "1-0"]
    [Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis?tab=analysis"]

    1. Nc3 c5 2. b4 d6 3. bxc5 Qa5 4. cxd6 Nc6 5. dxe7 Bxe7 6. e3 Nf6 7. Bb2 Qf5 8. Nf3 O-O 9. Ne2 Nb4 10. Ned4 Qa5 11. a4 Bd7 12. Be2 Rfd8 13. Ba3 h6 14. Qb1 Rab8 15. O-O Nc6 16. Bxe7 Nxe7 17. c3 Be6 18. Nxe6 fxe6 19. Qb3 Qd5 20. Bc4 Qe4 21. Bxe6+ Kh8 22. Bc4 Rdc8 23. Be2 Qf5 24. Qb1 Ne4 25. Nd4 Qg6 26. Bd3 Nxd2 27. Qc2 Qf6 28. Qxd2 Rc5 29. Be4 Nd5 30. Nb3 Rxc3 31. Qxd5 Re8 32. Qxb7 1-0

    If the game had continued:

    [Event "Chess Olympics"]
    [Site "Budapest, Hungary"]
    [Date "2024.09.23"]
    [Round "7"]
    [White "Laia Din (2051)"]
    [Black "Lucie Čechová (2198)"]
    [Result "1-0"]
    [Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis?tab=analysis"]

    1. Nc3 c5 2. b4 d6 3. bxc5 Qa5 4. cxd6 Nc6 5. dxe7 Bxe7 6. e3 Nf6 7. Bb2 Qf5 8. Nf3 O-O 9. Ne2 Nb4 10. Ned4 Qa5 11. a4 Bd7 12. Be2 Rfd8 13. Ba3 h6 14. Qb1 Rab8 15. O-O Nc6 16. Bxe7 Nxe7 17. c3 Be6 18. Nxe6 fxe6 19. Qb3 Qd5 20. Bc4 Qe4 21. Bxe6+ Kh8 22. Bc4 Rdc8 23. Be2 Qf5 24. Qb1 Ne4 25. Nd4 Qg6 26. Bd3 Nxd2 27. Qc2 Qf6 28. Qxd2 Rc5 29. Be4 Nd5 30. Nb3 Rxc3 31. Qxd5 Re8 32. Qxb7 Rxb3 33. Qxb3 Rxe4 34. Qb8+ Kh7 35. Qb1 Qf5 36. f3 Re5 37. Qxf5+ Rxf5 38. f4 g5 39. e4 Rxf4 40. Rxf4 gxf4 41. e5 Kg7 42. e6 Kf6 43. Re1 Ke7 44. a5 h5 45. h4 Kf8 46. e7+ Ke8 47. Re6 f3 48. a6 fxg2 49. Kxg2 Kf7 50. e8=Q+ Kg7 51. Qg6+ Kh8 52. Re8# 1-0

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    Chapter:410







    Apr 13, 2025

    Author's Commentary #403:

    Time to talk about Chapter 403: Enter the Fairy gauntlet.
    It's time to see just what Daria was doing that led to her facing so many people. Turns out, she was on an infiltration mission to try and save Ina. That means the "Daria" that was present in the playing hall was actually Miga in disguise. Unfortunately for Daria, the Fairies look to be one step ahead, or rather, held a trump card the WWCF didn't know about. I'll get more into that in the commentary of later chapters.

    As for the game, it's Sorcha vs Daria proper, with a Chigorin, Irish gambit as well. It really is ironic that despite this one being the more solid of the two Irish gambits, all the games it's showcased in result in Black's loss, while the other Irish gambit is always able to win. Not sure if this will continue throughout the course of the series, but it just might as sort of a series joke.

    Yet the match with Sorcha is only the beginning. Daria is now stuck in a simul challenge where she must beat all the challengers that come before her in order to free the hostages. I will give fair warning that due to burnout and the sheer amount of games that Daria will be playing, I will not be showcasing all of them properly in their entirety. That being said, to compensate there will be some chapters delving into Daria's backstory, which will feature a really good game shown in it's entirety, and trust me, you'll want to see this game. All I'll say is that it's so hype, it's in contention for being one of the top 30 best games in the series.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:403






    Apr 13, 2025

    Author's Commentary #41:

    Time to discuss Chapter 41: One wrong move.
    This was originally the 42nd chapter, but I decided to move things around as part of my revisions to Season 2 and 3. As such, this chapter now takes place much sooner than before. It also used to be split into two chapters, but following the most recent revisions to Season 1, I decided to merge them. The title of the chapter that used to exist was "The cruelest of wins". As for why I merged the two, it was both because I didn't want the chapter numbers to get all messed up following the Season 1 revisions, and because I felt the game worked better being meshed into one chapter.

    I guess now is a good time to divulge more on Kazuya. He is the student council president and has a knack for politics. However, he is also dating and highly obedient to Shion. He's so loyal to Shion, that he essentially functions as her proxy for controlling the student council behind the scenes.

    The kanji for his full name is 榎 和矢 (Enoki Kazuya). His first name, 和矢, translates to "harmony" and "dart", though also "feces" which is why the principal gave him the name since he believed he was shit, due to not having a knack for shogi. In short, the principal was a piece of shit, which is why Kazuya had no problem killing him.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    His favorite piece is the knight as he views himself as Shion's noble knight.

    Since he's Nagi's older twin brother, he shares his April 6th birthday with him. The two actually got along fairly well, so much so that when Kazuya heard of Nagi's death, he put a plan of vengeance in motion. As for said plan, the principal's death is the first phase of it while phase 2 centers around Utami.

    Speaking of which, Utami's actually been living with Mimoko ever since the bughouse game. As such, they've gotten much closer with each other as no one else in Mimoko's family plays chess.

    The game for this chapter was easily the one I hated writing the most. Getting the game to the point where Utami was on the verge of being promoted was a nightmare. I actually had to go through three different games before getting everything right.

    The first was good until I realized Utami's pawn had been captured early so that game had to go. The second game was just bad. I basically had the characters intentionally making bad moves in order to set up the scenario where Utami's pawn made it to the 2nd rank. Then there was this one... It was the best, so I went with it.

    As for the pawn promotion rule, Kazuya's actually the only one who's experimented with it. Technically speaking, the pawn itself is completely removed from play when it promotes. I'm sure this topic has the potential to spawn many debates regarding it.

    One notable change between this revised version and the original version is Svetlana's presence. I felt having Svetlana be present here worked better as it both illustrates how rash in judgement she can be when Okisato's around, and helps show off a key plot-point of the story, which I'll discuss in greater detail in a later commentary.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:41