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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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Sep 16, 2026

To:Katsuhito

It is all in Ami's hands.

Witch x Guard

Chapter:32

Sep 15, 2026

Author's Commentary #928:

Time to talk about Chapter 928: How the chess centers came to be.
I've got one more chapter themed around Kawaguchi to round out this batch of specials. This time, it centers on how Daria got the chess centers approved.

I was originally going to have her have to play a game to get approval, but felt it was better not to as really, the only objection came from Xiao Lin, and at the time, the last thing she'd want would be to face Daria in a game. This does take place before the Chess Olympics after all.

Speaking of which, the IRL 46th Chess Olympiad is set to begin shortly in Samarkand, Uzbekistan. As such, I feel like I'll try to put out some good content while it's ongoing, such as a Side Story. I still do have something good in the wings I can use, but I might opt for something original to better celebrate the occasion.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:928

Sep 14, 2026

Really did enjoy this chapter. Topaz became much more likeable as a character in my opinion.

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:16

Sep 14, 2026

What a ride this has been indeed. As a chapter, this is really good. As the final chapter? Not so sure. I really feel like teasing Magnis isn't as satisfying a note to end on. Not to mention, there's still plenty of mysteries. I feel like maybe if there was one or two more arcs after, things could've wrapped up better. That said, the earlier arcs, particularly the academy one were very good, or should I say... interesting...

Joking aside, I feel every arc was really good, which honestly bums me out a bit with the final one as it has a great setup, but the story ending after the epic battle just kind of deflates things for me. Like, a whole new dynamic is getting introduced to the story, except the story now ends. That aside, you did hit all the key points with Flint's struggles. Congratulations on finishing and good luck with the contest.

Undead Blade: The Crimson Gate & The Last Swordsman

Chapter:36

Sep 14, 2026

I could tell it was a trap the moment Ylaria first appeared. Probably because there was a similar case in Frieren.

The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:27

Sep 14, 2026

Caught a grammar error. The "g" in Ylaria's "good girls go to sleep early" line isn't capitalized.

The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:27

Sep 14, 2026

I'll be honest, I do feel like this does feel a tad rushed. Perhaps it's due to Flint falling off a cliff as usually when that happens, it takes a while for the hero to get back up. Maybe if the party lost and got captured, Flint still hears them, and slowly gets up before chasing down and confronting them it wouldn't feel rushed.

Undead Blade: The Crimson Gate & The Last Swordsman

Chapter:35

Sep 14, 2026

This was such a good chapter. If there really are only two chapters left though, hmm. I'll withhold judgement until everything plays out.

Undead Blade: The Crimson Gate & The Last Swordsman

Chapter:34

Sep 14, 2026

Right when I was going to say how it would be good if the knights were actually evil... At the very least, they look like they'll be the antagonists this arc, maybe.

Undead Blade: The Crimson Gate & The Last Swordsman

Chapter:33

Sep 14, 2026

To:Katsuhito

Don't worry, the Ami x Mariamne ship will be sunk rather quickly.

Witch x Guard

Chapter:31

Sep 14, 2026

To:Katsuhito

Never actually drank one of those, so I have no idea how it tastes, but for the cool blue, it's definitely a non-carbonated blue raspberry flavor.

Witch x Guard

Chapter:30

Sep 14, 2026

Author's Commentary #927:

Time to talk about Chapter 927: Trimming the grass.
While the chapter is short, the backstory behind it is a bit longer. As some might remember, a little over a year ago, I visited Sanryosuimon Memorial Park in Kawaguchi. At the time, I remember the grass being completely mowed, however, when I visited it recently, the grass was overgrown.

At first, I got sad, thinking the place had been neglected, but after pulling up a photo I took when I first visited, I saw that in it, the grass was grown, though not as overgrown, leading me to assume that the grass does indeed get trimmed after it grows to a certain point. Though regardless, the lore in-universe is that it grows and gets trimmed semi-regularly, at least until the chess center was put in. After that, the grass is always trimmed and never overgrown. Finally, much like the previous chapter, this one is canon. It also means Mimoko's first encounter with Yuusuke was indeed him jumping out of the tall grass to scare her. Perhaps this might be why she didn't quite fall for him like he did for her.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:927

Sep 13, 2026

Author's Commentary #926:

Time to talk about Chapter 926: A stroller ride to Sanryosuimon Memorial Park.
In case anyone forgot, Sanryosuimon Memorial Park in Kawaguchi is where the Kawaguchi chess center is located, as well as where Mimoko likes to hang out. A recent trip there inspired me to write more on its significance to Mimoko.

Baby Mimoko was also an idea that popped into my mind for this. I just saw the image of her with tiny twintails and felt I just had to put that in writing. With this inspiration fresh in my mind, I feel like I'll do a few more chapters like this before going into a new Side Story in time for the Chess Olympiad. In fact, I might even upgrade this chapter to Side Story status in a similar vain to what I did with Chapter 100: Chess at the beach. Regardless, this chapter is completely canon to the overall story, so don't dismiss it as filler.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:926

Sep 13, 2026

Author's Commentary #925:

Time to talk about Chapter 925: The streak persists.
I managed to upload a chapter in time to maintain my daily upload streak. That said, I initially just uploaded a single sentence before editing things later.

Expanding on the skit felt necessary to me, mainly because I at least wanted the chapter volume to be larger. Of course, for the initial upload, I was even willing to just type a single word or letter, but I have quality standards for these kinds of things.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:925

Sep 13, 2026

Author's Commentary #924:

Time to talk about Chapter 924: A quickie from the author.
Written while packing, I felt this was the best kind of chapter to post since I didn't want to jump into anything new. Funnily enough, I actually went to Kawaguchi before writing this chapter.

Obviously, I'm writing this commentary after coming back from vacation, as there was no way I had the time to do so right after uploading it. As for the next chapter, I'm hoping to upload it in time to keep up my daily upload streak, but said day I'd have to upload it on is a travel day.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:924

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