Dec 28, 2021
To:otkrlj
Found some of 'em:
"There was violence everywhere in the area[] it seemed, regardless of the time."
"There was violence everywhere in the area, it seemed, regardless of the time."
"Hey[] Daniel, I know —>its<— been a while."
"Hey, Daniel, I know it's been a while."
"the parable of the —>prodigal's<— son."
"prodigal"
"Come[,] home[] son, please."
"Come home, son, please."
"Money brought several things[] good and bad."
"Money brought several things, good and bad."
"He stared at it with eyes —>focused as snipers<—."
"He stared at it with eyes as focused as a sniper's." (Probably)
"In the flock of America, any shepherd would protect the herd over a single lost —>sleep<—."
"sheep"
"Shaking ground —>met<— little to him."
"meant"
"Memories of Daniel's crimes floated through the room like fish —>on<— a cloudy sea."
"in"
"—>Danial's<— head was too cluttered with chemicals blowing around like a hurricane in his head."
"Daniel's"
"There are moments in people's lives that change them forever[] mixed with choices that direct their path forward."
"There are moments in people's lives that change them forever, mixed with choices that direct their path forward."
...
I really like the themes in the story.
Yeah... extremely exciting, lol.
