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A writer hoping to gain more writing experience. I'd appreciate it if you'd give my story a read :)
Instagram: @dvverson
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Aug 21, 2021
I can only agree with the others. It was captivating!
Nice prologue!
Nice chapter๐
Truly a great prologue! I love the broliloquy๐
Interesting synopsis and a nice first chapter๐
I like your story so far!๐
Aug 18, 2021
This is really great! I agree with the others. I got goosebumps reading this๐
Interesting story so far! But if I may point out, it would be better if you try to stick to one perspective. For example in this chapter, you sometimes switch between the first and third perspective.
To:RexxDrink
Thanks! I'll give yours a read, for sure.
Aug 12, 2021
I've finally had the time to read your work and it's great! Can't wait for more๐
Aug 07, 2021
Great chapter, can't wait for more!
To:Wortal
Thanks for your comment! Now I've realized that I forgot to put the Shounen genre on it, haha
Aug 06, 2021
Nice chapter!๐
Aug 05, 2021
This was an incredible chapter!๐
What a nice king XD
